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route_0062014-10-16 12:05 am
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HMD | October 2014
EVALUATE MY BATTLING!
Trainer Tip: play nice and keep it civil.
things to keep in mind:
→ This is encouraged, not mandatory. We will not penalize you for not using it.
→ Feel free to link your personal HMDs if you would like, just in case someone doesn't want to use the mass HMD post.
→ this is more for actual critique and discussion. Please don't just blindly praise a person or just call them horrible. If someone's doing a wonderful job, you can tell them, just tell them why, or even where they're showing off bonus perks. If someone's doing a not-so-wonderful job, tell them why, give them things to improve on if you can. Examples, links, things that can give them something to work on. Meaning, no bashing, flaming, or nasty behavior. Please keep it civil.
→ Anonymous is turned on! But note: anonymous is a privilege, not a right. If it's being abused to bash players, please be sure to let one of us know and we'll step in or freeze threads if necessary. If anonymous is abused too much, it will be turned off for the next HMD.
→ Don't take this all too personally! Remember that roleplay is a game, and crit is supposed to help, not make you feel horribly. No one is perfect, we've all got room to improve. Please keep that in mind.
→ MOD/GAME HMD
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(Also, on the Rocket front, he doesn't know that getting two starters or being in Goldenrod means you're a Rocket. As far as he knows, he just got two starters because he's that special.)
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(Anonymous) 2014-10-16 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)I'm a little concerned that you don't have any reasoning for those choices. There's leeway for interpretation with any character, but that needs to be supported by canon or game development. Otherwise it seems like you're ignoring characterization in order to get the outcome you want, rather than following what the character would be likely to do in that situation.
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As for ignoring characterization to suit my needs: I promise I'm not doing that on purpose. I'm doing my best to follow the characterization as well as I can. I see your point that it might seem that way, but any mistakes are because I'm bad at characterization, not because I'm intentionally manipulating anything.
As for everything else: that's fair. I'm not sure what I can say, apart from what I've said: that I've taken what you said about supporting his actions into consideration, and I'll try to do better. Thank you for your feedback. I'll do my best to use it to improve.
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(Anonymous) 2014-10-16 11:25 pm (UTC)(link)