HMD | June 2014

[these_balls]

EVALUATE MY BATTLING!

Trainer Tip: play nice and keep it civil.


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Comments

[athirst]

uchiha sasuke | naruto ( athirst )

not only new here but bitty sasook is a different twist for me so if there's any feedback possible, have at me! i'm a bit sluggish because of world cup and traveling, so i apologize for slowness and such!

[(Anonymous)]

You're doing really well with him so far! I'm glad to see him in Route and I've been looking forward to seeing how he interacts with the world at large there. The reactions feel very much like how Sasuke would react if he was dropped into Johto as a 7 year old boy, so good on you!

Keep up the good work.

[athirst]

auhgh thank you so much anon!! i'll continue doing my best at throwing him out there!! ♥

[nostabbing]

I agree with the above anon! I ended up looking through Sasuke's seven-year-old chapters when he entered the game, and given what I saw there, he really feels spot-on. I'm really excited to see how he'll grow and develop in a place like Johto, given how much his circumstances back home shaped his identity and how much different things will be for him, here!

I think you're doing a great job, and I'm definitely looking forward to more CR with him. o/

[athirst]

thank you! aaa thanks so much. i myself definitely look forward to playing more with you, as well as getting to mess with development- and hopefully i'll be able to keep up with that, too!

again, thanks for the comment! it means a lot. :)