HMD | June 2014

[these_balls]

EVALUATE MY BATTLING!

Trainer Tip: play nice and keep it civil.


things to keep in mind:
→ This is encouraged, not mandatory. We will not penalize you for not using it.
→ Feel free to link your personal HMDs if you would like, just in case someone doesn't want to use the mass HMD post.
→ this is more for actual critique and discussion. Please don't just blindly praise a person or just call them horrible. If someone's doing a wonderful job, you can tell them, just tell them why, or even where they're showing off bonus perks. If someone's doing a not-so-wonderful job, tell them why, give them things to improve on if you can. Examples, links, things that can give them something to work on. Meaning, no bashing, flaming, or nasty behavior. Please keep it civil.
→ Anonymous is turned on! But note: anonymous is a privilege, not a right. If it's being abused to bash players, please be sure to let one of us know and we'll step in or freeze threads if necessary. If anonymous is abused too much, it will be turned off for the next HMD.
→ Don't take this all too personally! Remember that roleplay is a game, and crit is supposed to help, not make you feel horribly. No one is perfect, we've all got room to improve. Please keep that in mind.

→ MOD/GAME HMD

Comments

MOD/GAME HMD

[these_balls]

Scar | Fullmetal Alchemist

[envy_the_sinners]

The HMD on his journal, if you prefer!

[doitrockapella]

Carmen Sandiego | Where On Earth Is Carmen Sandiego? | doitrockapella
Parker | Leverage | nostabbing
Kyouko Kirigiri | Dangan Ronpa | freshprints
Schuldig | Weiss Kreuz | aufsassig

Questions, comments, feedback, and so on are all welcome and appreciated! Also, if there's something I can do better as a mod, please let me know here or on the Mod/Game HMD Thread, and I'd be happy to get a dialogue going with you about it!

[cobraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa]

Cobra Commander | G.I. Joe | cobraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa | HMD

[ossifragant]

Greed | Fullmetal Alchemist | ossifragant
Major Ocelot | Metal Gear Solid | shest

Both also have HMDs in their journals.

[adnihilum]

Flynn | Shin Megami Tensei IV | adnihilum

I'm still terribly new to everything, so critique is much appreciated!

[athirst]

uchiha sasuke | naruto ( athirst )

not only new here but bitty sasook is a different twist for me so if there's any feedback possible, have at me! i'm a bit sluggish because of world cup and traveling, so i apologize for slowness and such!

[majorcrotchgrab]

Major Raikov || Metal Gear Solid || majorcrotchgrab || Personal HMD

My own complaint about myself is my lack of activity. I've had a busy month and I'm trying to get back into the RP swing so I apologize for sporadic tags. I miss my desktop computer too orz.

[majorcrotchgrab]

I'm not overly familiar with FMA but I love your Greed. So pimpin'. SHIP RAIKOV/GREED 5EVER.

AS FOR OCELOT. I'm really enjoying threading with him! (Both young and old.) You've got a really good grasp of his character. And I can't wait to see more stuff with him and his fellow Rockets. Raikov wants to be more of an ass to him just for old times sake but Ocelot's the only person he's familiar with in this place so he'd rather not burn his bridges so quickly. Curse you, Ocelot.

[lieutenantantichrist]

Carter Blake | Heavy Rain | lieutenantantichrist

[captainash]

Cecil Harvey | Final Fantasy IV: The After Years (Dissidia: Final Fantasy) | paladinlost
Captain Ash | Mobile Suit Gundam AGE | captainash

Vanellope von Schweetz | Wreck-It Ralph

[rarestcandy]

Here's her personal HMD, if you'd rather.

Feeling a bit rocky with her and trying to get better about activity while I prepare to (finally) come off hiatus. Please let me know about anything you feel I can improve on!

[exeggutorhead]

Envy | Fullmetal Alchemist | exeggutorhead

Yusuke Urameshi | Yu Yu Hakusho

[angerpoints]

Yusuke Urameshi | Yu Yu Hakusho | angerpoints | PRIVATE HMD

Yusuke recently canon updated, so if there's any feedback you have relating to that (like in regards to how I'm handling it so far), please let me know! General feedback is also appreciated, of course. o/

[crackpotcrocker]

Denzel Crocker | Fairly Oddparents | crackpotcrocker

[friendyousohard]

Twilight Sparkle | MLP: FiM | friendyousohard
Ilyasviel von Einzbern | Fate/Stay Night | dressofheaven

[tearsofademon]

Ryner Lute :: tearsofademon :: The Legend of the Legendary Heroes

He also has a character-specific HMD here if you prefer.

[ardent]

Kiyotaka Ishimaru | Dangan Ronpa | ardent
Solf J Kimblee | Fullmetal Alchemist | explosivecombat
Alfred Ashford | Resident Evil | twinsanity
Nonon Jakuzure | Kill la Kill | fatalissimo

[(Anonymous)]

You're doing really well with him so far! I'm glad to see him in Route and I've been looking forward to seeing how he interacts with the world at large there. The reactions feel very much like how Sasuke would react if he was dropped into Johto as a 7 year old boy, so good on you!

Keep up the good work.

[nostabbing]

I agree with the above anon! I ended up looking through Sasuke's seven-year-old chapters when he entered the game, and given what I saw there, he really feels spot-on. I'm really excited to see how he'll grow and develop in a place like Johto, given how much his circumstances back home shaped his identity and how much different things will be for him, here!

I think you're doing a great job, and I'm definitely looking forward to more CR with him. o/

[athirst]

auhgh thank you so much anon!! i'll continue doing my best at throwing him out there!! ♥

[athirst]

thank you! aaa thanks so much. i myself definitely look forward to playing more with you, as well as getting to mess with development- and hopefully i'll be able to keep up with that, too!

again, thanks for the comment! it means a lot. :)

[freckledoll]

Doll | Kuroshtisuji | freckledoll