I have to agree with the above anon on Crocker's self-pity.
You've got his craziness down very well. I actually like the different sizes of text that you use to denote how unhinged he is. But I have to admit that I'm unsure about how to tag Crocker because he's a lot more angsty than I remember. I know he had crap circumstances but Fairly Oddparents is a children's cartoon. None of that is discussed very seriously in the show and by constantly focusing on it as one of Crocker's defining traits I think you're making him less funny and less, for lack of a better word, "cartoony". So he feels less like the cartoon character he is in the show and more of an OC that's based somewhat on the character but placed in the real world with real-life consequences. I think you'd benefit if you stopped playing him as a real person and remember that at the end of the day Crocker's past isn't meant to be taken as seriously as it should be in real life.
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You've got his craziness down very well. I actually like the different sizes of text that you use to denote how unhinged he is. But I have to admit that I'm unsure about how to tag Crocker because he's a lot more angsty than I remember. I know he had crap circumstances but Fairly Oddparents is a children's cartoon. None of that is discussed very seriously in the show and by constantly focusing on it as one of Crocker's defining traits I think you're making him less funny and less, for lack of a better word, "cartoony". So he feels less like the cartoon character he is in the show and more of an OC that's based somewhat on the character but placed in the real world with real-life consequences. I think you'd benefit if you stopped playing him as a real person and remember that at the end of the day Crocker's past isn't meant to be taken as seriously as it should be in real life.