You need to start proofreading your tags. There are a lot of typos and words that are transposed or otherwise misused in your tags, and they seem like things that could be easily fixed if you read over what you wrote before sending it. The misused words are often close to what you mean to say, so it's probably a case of a typo making another word. Spell check won't catch everything, you have to go back and proofread yourself.

I think you would also benefit from actually paying attention to how the people you play with format things. Not that you need to copy people exactly or do everything just like a certain person or certain people, but the way you format things is really hard to read. For example, in your tags there are very few line breaks and paragraphs tend to run together, making it hard to discern where one thought ends and another begins. I get that that might be part of the character, but it makes longer tags a headache and a half to read. Try breaking it up more, and put clean paragraph breaks instead of just single-spacing it. LONG BLOCKS OF CAPSLOCK EMPHASIS is also not necessary, at least not to the extent that you use it.

This last point may need to be taken with a grain of salt because it's been a while since I've seen the show, but I don't remember Crocker being nearly so self-pitying or prone to making obvious ploys for sympathy. Is there a reason he's been doing that in Route that I've missed?