HMD | March 2012

[these_balls]

EVALUATE MY BATTLING!

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Comments

MOD / GAME HMD

[these_balls]

[hintcoinplz]

Luke Triton | Professor Layton | hintcoinplz

[nasa_dreams]

Not much of a crit, but I seriously loved our thread on how to talk to women. Which resulted in a thread about boobs. Epic.

[digital_bingo]

☼ Monkey D. Luffy | little_anchor ✖ one piece → crit page
❤ Miyako Inoue | digital_bingo ✖ digimon adventure 02

[cobraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa]

Cobra Commander | G.I. Joe | cobraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa | HMD

[usedlaserbeam]

Okay, so I just had to take a minute out to say that I really, really like what you're doing with Cobra Commander — largely, the fact that he is rabblerousing a little bit, and enacting fantastically stupid 90's Cartoon Villain Evil Plans™, and you're letting him be kind of hilarious and fail and over-the-top and just generally fun. It's a really nice thing to see, and I think you strike a good balance of making him appropriately silly without making him a complete joke, if that makes sense? He's got just the right level of sort of ridiculous incompetence, and I mean that in the best possible way.

[derpsaboutfamily]

Maes Hughes | FullMetal Alchemist | derpsaboutfamily
Gluttony | FullMetal Alchemist | mayieatthat
Ouka Sakaki | FullMetal Alchemist | worththeclub

I've got a general HMD here for all my games.

JUST THIS DERP

[chemistryinmotion]

Wally West | Young Justice | chemistryinmotion

Re: JUST THIS DERP

[nasa_dreams]

I just love that Danny has super hero buds now! Also that you guys are cool with him trolling Connor all the time, rofl.

[urbaninja]

Roxas/seasaltkeys/Kingdom Hearts
Barney Stinson/usedsuitup/How I Met Your Mother

Notes:
Feeling pretty comfortable with both, but starting the canon review process anyway.
It's underway with Roxas since I finally found my copy of Days. Barney might take a little more effort since I have to track down DVDs and then find time in the day. But it's going to happen.
As always questions/comments/etc welcome.

[foolishwren]

Just Heather here!

My activity's really slowed down lately thanks to my thesis (ICON IS AN ACCURATE REPRESENTATION OF MY GENERAL STATE OF BEING)-- so I apologize for that!

This has also sort of impacted Heather's voice a little bit, OR SO I'M WORRIED, so please feel free to let me know if anything's been off lately.

[artfuldestruction]

Emmy Altava | Professor Layton | snapandscoot
Major Alex Armstrong | Fullmetal Alchemist | sculpted

Oh, and this guy, but he was only just accepted, so!

[ordalias]

Xion | Kingdom Hearts | ordalias
Saber/Nero | Fate/Extra | autocratic

[soggypastry]

Lightning Farron | Final Fantasy XIII | soggypastry
Toushiro Hitsugaya | Bleach | freezetheskies

[exeggutorhead]

Envy | Fullmetal Alchemist (2003) | exeggutorhead

[emotes]

Hershel Layton || Professor Layton || puzzling
Souji Seta || Persona 4 || tarotcards

still gonna try to boost my activity slowly but my laptop is busted and rl has been kicking me, so I apologize that I'm still not improving as quickly as I can.

[explosivecombat]

Solf J Kimblee | Fullmetal Alchemist | explosivecombat
Jean Descole | Professor Layton | scientificflair

Also GLaDOS from Portal (neurotoxined) but she has yet to be intro'd! I'm on top of things tonight I promise

[nasa_dreams]

The fact that Kimblee has found a way to make shit explode is the greatest. He wouldn't be Kimblee if he couldn't! I love how thought out it was, too, rather than just, "HERP DERP I BOUGHT SOME TNT LOL".

[complexrestart]

Rika Furude • Higurashi no Naku Koro ni • complexrestart

[determinator]

✰ Frank Archer | Fullmetal Alchemist (2003 anime) | determinator
✰ Isaac McDougal | Fullmetal Alchemist: Brotherhood | glaciates
✰ Nitrous Oxide | Crash Bandicoot | n2o
✰ Wheatley | Portal | brilliantideas

Wheatley was just accepted and hasn't introed yet. I've been particularly bad with Oxide tags and might drop him and I've been slow in general.

[justicereigns]

Smoker | One Piece | smokinghunter | HMD

[failures]

Larry Butz | Ace Attorney | failures

[babel_hacker]

Atsuro Kihara | SMT: Devil Survivor | babel_hacker

[doitrockapella]

Yagyuu Hiroshi | Prince of Tennis | usedlaserbeam
Carmen Sandiego | Your Childhood Where On Earth Is Carmen Sandiego? | doitrockapella

Notes:
-Yagyuu has slowed down a bit with a lot of his CR gone, so I know I need to get him in gear and work on that, but it might take a bit until my schedule clears up a little more, unfortunately.

-Carmen is relatively new and I'm still getting the swing of her voice, so feedback on that would be great. o/

Also, comments and questions are welcome!

[cobraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa]

I just wanted to say that I think you're doing an absolutely wonderful job with Carmen. I can hear her voice clearly in every tag, and threading with her reminds me of being a kid and yelling at the Where in Time Is Carmen Sandiego? game I used to have.

[youngforhisage]

Asuma | Hibiki's Magic | youngforhisage

[darkenedgales]

Crow Hogan | Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's | darkenedgales
Chidori Yoshino | Shin Megami Tensei: Persona 3 | springoflife

Both have anon-enabled HMDs on top of their journals!

I know Chidori's been slightly non-existent recently, but I'm planning to change that! I also apologize for possible slowness, but this month has been kicking my ass so far and it doesn't look like it's gonna change.

[bamfsecretary]

Nanao Ise | Bleach | bamfsecretary

She has an anon-enabled HMD stickied to the top of her journal if you'd like to use that! and yes I know I just rejoined the game shhhhh

[commune]

Tavros Nitram (commune) | Homestuck

Anon-enabled HMD in his journal! Sorry for the hellaciously slow and/or dropped tags lately... things have been pretty hectic irl.

[uuing]

Maria Ushiromiya (uuing) → Umineko no Naku Koro ni

personal hmd in journal!