Mmmm, maybe I could say exclaims in brackets or something. His speech dialogue is rather odd since if you listen to the man speak, he can start out in a normal tone, start mumble talking out loud to himself or some variation of that (in a sentence!) and just normal text like this doesn't quite work to have him come off as insane.
Though I am sorry about the headache, anon. I'll try using the brackets to explain how his tone is changing.
He monologues about self pity/bitterness, not that other characters in the show listen to that.
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Mmmm, maybe I could say exclaims in brackets or something. His speech dialogue is rather odd since if you listen to the man speak, he can start out in a normal tone, start mumble talking out loud to himself or some variation of that (in a sentence!) and just normal text like this doesn't quite work to have him come off as insane.
Though I am sorry about the headache, anon. I'll try using the brackets to explain how his tone is changing.
He monologues about self pity/bitterness, not that other characters in the show listen to that.