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Route 29: mods ([personal profile] these_balls) wrote in [community profile] route_0062013-03-16 11:29 pm
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HMD | March 2013

EVALUATE MY BATTLING!



Trainer Tip: play nice and keep it civil.


things to keep in mind:
→ This is encouraged, not mandatory. We will not penalize you for not using it.
→ Feel free to link your personal HMDs if you would like, just in case someone doesn't want to use the mass HMD post.
→ this is more for actual critique and discussion. Please don't just blindly praise a person or just call them horrible. If someone's doing a wonderful job, you can tell them, just tell them why, or even where they're showing off bonus perks. If someone's doing a not-so-wonderful job, tell them why, give them things to improve on if you can. Examples, links, things that can give them something to work on. Meaning, no bashing, flaming, or nasty behavior. Please keep it civil.
→ Anonymous is turned on! But note: anonymous is a privilege, not a right. If it's being abused to bash players, please be sure to let one of us know and we'll step in or freeze threads if necessary. If anonymous is abused too much, it will be turned off for the next HMD.
→ Don't take this all too personally! Remember that roleplay is a game, and crit is supposed to help, not make you feel horribly. No one is perfect, we've all got room to improve. Please keep that in mind.

MOD/GAME HMD
beforethedarkness: (I'll kill him no matter what!)

[personal profile] beforethedarkness 2013-03-17 03:34 am (UTC)(link)
Sasuke Uchiha | Naruto | Private HMD

Lay it on me, because even if I think I'm doing okay there's always room for improvement. Sasuke is a character I worry about almost constantly in terms of development - am I overplaying his issues and obsessions, underplaying them, not making him work hard enough, making him do things for the wrong reasons, and a whack load of other questions that would take forever to list out here. However, things I might be doing wrong are not things I can easily see, so outside help is always welcome to help me improve with his voice and just improve generally as a player.
Edited 2013-03-17 21:42 (UTC)
healium: (<3)

[personal profile] healium 2013-03-17 03:35 am (UTC)(link)
Jane Crocker | Homestuck | [personal profile] healium
Vanitas | Kingdom Hearts | [personal profile] shadowdive
Cheria Barnes | Tales of Graces f | [personal profile] fairycircle
eyes_are_uphere: (Visions of the future)

[personal profile] eyes_are_uphere 2013-03-17 03:36 am (UTC)(link)
Tsunade | Naruto | Private HMD

I know I've been on hiatus and a little flaky as of recent, but any crit or questions about how I play Tsunade would be absolutely welcomed.
paladinlost: (parade)

[personal profile] paladinlost 2013-03-17 03:36 am (UTC)(link)
Cecil Harvey | Final Fantasy IV: The After Years | [personal profile] paladinlost
Captain Ash | Mobile Suit Gundam AGE | [personal profile] captainash
haveyouseenalittlegirl: (A long walk in the fog)

[personal profile] haveyouseenalittlegirl 2013-03-17 03:38 am (UTC)(link)
Harry Mason | Silent Hill | [personal profile] haveyouseenalittlegirl
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[personal profile] gracefall 2013-03-17 03:38 am (UTC)(link)
Joonhee Kang | Answer me 1997 | [personal profile] unended
Xiaoqiao | Dynasty Warriors | [personal profile] gracefall

There is also anon enabled hmd on both their journals if you'd prefer.
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[personal profile] searsblindly 2013-03-17 03:41 am (UTC)(link)
Terezi Pyrope | Homestuck | [personal profile] searsblindly | Journal HMD
doitrockapella: (TEASE ❖ off to steal the sun)

[personal profile] doitrockapella 2013-03-17 03:42 am (UTC)(link)
Yagyuu Hiroshi | Prince of Tennis | [personal profile] usedlaserbeam
Carmen Sandiego | Where On Earth Is Carmen Sandiego? | [personal profile] doitrockapella
Albert Rosenfield | Twin Peaks | [personal profile] worktodo
Parker | Leverage | [personal profile] nostabbing

Questions, comments, feedback, and so on are all welcome and appreciated — particularly for Parker, since she's my newbie of the roster!

Also, if there's something I can do better as a mod, please let me know here or on the Mod/Game HMD Thread, and I'd be happy to get a dialogue going with you about it!
exeggutorhead: (Default)

[personal profile] exeggutorhead 2013-03-17 03:42 am (UTC)(link)
Envy | Fullmetal Alchemist | [personal profile] exeggutorhead
Temeraire | Temeraire series | [personal profile] divinewind

I've been incredibly slow lately on account of work stress eating my life, but that should be getting better shortly.
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[personal profile] aburame 2013-03-17 03:42 am (UTC)(link)
Shino Aburame | Naruto | Private HMD
soggypastry: (Default)

[personal profile] soggypastry 2013-03-17 03:46 am (UTC)(link)
Lightning Farron | Final Fantasy XIII | [personal profile] soggypastry | HMD

As always, anon is on and IP-log is off on her private HMD. I will also respond to any PM's, Sock-Account or otherwise, if you would prefer to use that.
islandshore: (Default)

[personal profile] islandshore 2013-03-17 03:48 am (UTC)(link)
Riku | [personal profile] islandshore | Kingdom Hearts
Bowser | [personal profile] kingbowser | Super Mario

Okay, so this is going to be a bit longer than the average HMD comment, but that's mainly because I have had some concerns brought to my attention recently thanks to a very helpful wankgate discussion. So, for those who don't watch WG, here are some things I am actively trying to address:

- Focusing on Riku as a character instead of just as a trainer
- Making his threads more conversational, less focused on himself and his team
- Consequences. Bowser is going to get some comeuppance soon, and I'm definitely going to dial back the impression I've been giving about Riku being super OP/godmode/etc. He's lost a few times, and I welcome more losses in the future because I think they can help his growth as a character. I do apologize for getting over-invested, too.
- Severely scaling back certain issues, like Terror, for one. I know I've made people uncomfortable with this. I likely won't be squeezing his 'mons in very many threads for a while unless the situation really calls for it.
- Making more varied and interesting posts. :|b I don't think I've had one I've been fully satisfied with in a while, anyway, and I miss silly shenanigans like the santa debate, which had nothing to do with 'mons.
- Planning ahead with Bowser plots so I don't step on toes. I'm also gonna space them out a bit more and throw in some silliness because it's... Bowser.

Other things of note...

- The TC as a pointless/annoying addition: I do want to fix this. For now, I will refrain from focusing on it ICly. As for the exhibition battles... if I continue them, I may see if other players want to have their chars host them, so it's not just my char and Sora showing off every time. But idk, maybe the idea was just too much. They probably won't be as frequent if I do continue doing 'em.

- Eggs. I probably won't do another egg batch for another month or two unless people really want them. I'm also thinking of doing smaller batches and focusing on some of the rarer species that don't get as much love.

- Approachability. Some anons expressed wariness at coming to me with crit, and I understand why in retrospect. I really want to stress that it is important that I know about issues, though, because if I only ever hear positive feedback, I can't really fix anything. I also really like it when people have suggestions to go with their concerns because it really gives me an idea of what to work towards!

To wrap up this tl;dr, I'll try to keep things under control, because the last thing I want is to make people unhappy. :( But I understand why I have, and I hope that I can make my characters more enjoyable to bounce off of in the future.
Edited 2013-03-17 03:57 (UTC)

(Anonymous) 2013-03-19 02:54 pm (UTC)(link)
hey, i'm one of the anons from that thread and i'm really glad to see you putting this to good use, though i'm a bit hesitant in doing so and i'm going to wait and see how well it works out, because you have gotten crit on this before and the issue continued to persist - but in the future, i'll definitely try to give suggestions so this is less of a problem.

i want to apologize, though, for the comments about the tc being pointless/lacking merit, that was something i said because i was frustrated and it was completely uncalled for. sorry about that.
islandshore: (determined)

[personal profile] islandshore 2013-03-19 03:03 pm (UTC)(link)
I think what really made a difference this time for me is that I saw just how many people were upset by it. Granted, the last time it persisted it wasn't my intent so much as... force of habit, I guess. I admit that I have a habit of getting really fixated on things-- it's not just an RP habit, but in my other interests. I think I just got a little too into all the team building and stuff I learned about Pokémon in order to accurately understand strategies for the character, and it got outta hand fast.

Definitely understand your hesitance, though, and I do hope that by setting specific goals for myself, I can get myself into new habits. :) Having silly threads like the one in Cecil's post have helped, since there's no need to even bring training into the equation. Seeing how I have Riku in games without Pokémon where I've fared much better overall, I think putting less focus on his team will allow me for more comfortable focus on Riku without getting too stuck up on presenting him as this unbeatable force.

And it's okay. I admit that sometimes I've felt that way about the TC as well, mainly because battles are something so handwavable that maybe having something specifically for training/easy leveling/recreation just wasn't necessary after all.
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[personal profile] enjoymyatelier 2013-03-17 03:50 am (UTC)(link)
Kayneth Archibald El-Melloi | Fate/Zero | Private HMD
tearsofademon: (strolling by the Seine)

[personal profile] tearsofademon 2013-03-17 03:52 am (UTC)(link)
Ryner Lute :: The Legend of the Legendary Heroes :: [personal profile] tearsofademon

He also has a character-specific HMD over here if you prefer.
believeit: <user name=dobe_teme site=livejournal.com> (no not the ramen!)

[personal profile] believeit 2013-03-17 03:52 am (UTC)(link)
Naruto Uzumaki | Naruto | [personal profile] used_friendship though you probs recognize the commenting journal [personal profile] believeit better
Edited 2013-03-17 03:52 (UTC)
moveslikestrider: (I put on a show.)

[personal profile] moveslikestrider 2013-03-17 03:57 am (UTC)(link)
Dave Strider | Homestuck | [personal profile] moveslikestrider | Journal HMD.

Been slow this month due to illness but, I'll be back going strong once it passes.
cobraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa: (I AM COBRA COMMANDER)

[personal profile] cobraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 2013-03-17 03:59 am (UTC)(link)
Cobra Commander | [personal profile] cobraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa | G.I. Joe | HMD

Gordon Cole | [personal profile] canthearyou | Twin Peaks | HMD
friendyousohard: (My hair static requires further study)

[personal profile] friendyousohard 2013-03-17 04:05 am (UTC)(link)
Twilight Sparkle | MLP: FiM | [personal profile] friendyousohard
Ilyasviel von Einzbern | Fate/Stay Night | [personal profile] dressofheaven

I've been a bit slow recently due to various things IRL, but I hope to turn that around soon. Please especially to be letting me know here if you think I've dropped a thread in the past few weeks, because I may have with how scatterbrained I've been.

Crit not related to my activity is also appreciated of course. (Especially on Ilya, I'm still really shaky with my grasp on her.)
enjoymyatelier: no seriously what are you doing (uhhhhhhhh....)

[personal profile] enjoymyatelier 2013-03-17 05:42 am (UTC)(link)
I think we kind of lost track with the Battle Club thread-would you be interested in continuing that? I'm probably going to edit my last comment in that thread because good lord my sentence structure got atrocious toward the end, but if you want to leave off on it that's cool.

OH also I think you're doing pretty well with Ilya so far-you seem to be balancing out her childishness and her underlying maturity pretty well, which is the main problem I would think of when dealing with Ilya. I'd give you more in-depth stuff but it would require some canon reviewing since I haven't read FSN since last year and my main resource for that is down right now, bluuuh.
Edited 2013-03-17 05:44 (UTC)

[personal profile] chainred 2013-04-15 06:27 am (UTC)(link)
I'm really late, but I think you're doing well with Ilya so far as well too. I'm not familiar with her canon point, so I should go double check it, but our thread with them in the pokeprom is going as expected. If I see anything I think should be brought to your attention, I gladly will let you know.
itsjustdust: (And you see how awesome!)

[personal profile] itsjustdust 2013-03-17 04:11 am (UTC)(link)
Obito Uchiha | Naruto

Feel free to hit his private HMD if you'd rather.
failures: (totally innocent)

[personal profile] failures 2013-03-17 04:47 am (UTC)(link)
Larry Butz | Ace Attorney | [personal profile] failures
Dist the Rose | Tales of the Abyss | [personal profile] ortion
Dimitri Allen | Professor Layton | [personal profile] faketime
lieutenantantichrist: (how my hair look)

[personal profile] lieutenantantichrist 2013-03-17 05:02 am (UTC)(link)
Carter Blake | Heavy Rain | [personal profile] lieutenantantichrist

Private HMD is here.
foolishwren: I CAN'T i'm 5'3"!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ("be the bigger person")

[personal profile] foolishwren 2013-03-17 05:03 am (UTC)(link)
Just me and Heather here!

There's also an HMD in her journal if anyone would feel more comfortable using that.
francia: (Default)

[personal profile] francia 2013-03-17 05:09 am (UTC)(link)
France | Axis Powers Hetalia | [personal profile] francia
starspangledavenger: (Captain America Salutes You)

[personal profile] starspangledavenger 2013-03-17 06:10 am (UTC)(link)
Steve Rogers (Captain America) | Marvel Cinematic Universe | [personal profile] starspangledavenger

I love critique! I'm always open to improving, so please don't hesitate to lay it on me.

Or if you rather: Private HMD
Edited 2013-03-17 06:11 (UTC)
falseshore: (o really?)

[personal profile] falseshore 2013-03-17 06:45 am (UTC)(link)
Riku Replica | Kingdom Hearts

Private HMD here if you'd prefer
darkenedgales: (too early for this shit)

[personal profile] darkenedgales 2013-03-17 07:14 am (UTC)(link)
Crow Hogan | Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's | [personal profile] darkenedgales | private HMD
neededlassie: (Come on dad hurry up)

[personal profile] neededlassie 2013-03-17 08:48 am (UTC)(link)
Shaun Mars | Heavy Rain | [personal profile] neededlassie

Things that I'm trying to keep in balance
-Not making his personal trauma conga line the focus of everything he does
--I know both of the recent logs I've been involved in have been depressing and along these lines, but I'm trying to keep his posts generally lighthearted to balance that out
-Keeping his tone consistent and realistic to an 11-year-old (even though his canon doesn't do the best job of that either)

I would like to know what I can do to improve in these regards, as well as anything that I might not have considered! And I wouldn't mind hearing if there's anything you think I'm doing right, either.
lucky8r8k: (pic#)

[personal profile] lucky8r8k 2013-03-17 10:42 am (UTC)(link)
Vriska Serket | Homestuck | [personal profile] lucky8r8k | Private HMD

I'm trying to see if I can motivate myself more for this game, but in the meanwhile, any feedback on how I've been doing with Vriska would be appreciated. I have tried her once before this place, but this is my first serious attempt at her. Also, that was a long while ago.
usedswift: (Default)

[personal profile] usedswift 2013-03-17 11:03 am (UTC)(link)
Tenten | Naruto | [personal profile] usedswift (private HMD)

I'm always looking for room to make sure I'm playing Tenten to the best of my ability -- whether it's replies that are just off or don't make sense, questions about headcanon/why I do what I do/etc, or just something about my play-style that you think could use improvement, please feel free to say so!
saxsongs: ➥ Official art (This is just a game)

[personal profile] saxsongs 2013-03-17 11:13 am (UTC)(link)
Kuranosuke Shiraishi | The Prince of Tennis | [personal profile] backtobasics
Takuto Kira | Full Moon wo Sagashite | [personal profile] itsudemoissho
Ren Jinguji | Uta no Prince-sama: Maji Love 1000% | [personal profile] saxsongs
Kira Yamato | Gundam SEED Destiny | [personal profile] replantsflowers
Ikuto Tsukiyomi | Shugo Chara! | [personal profile] blacklynx

All of them have private HMD's on their journals.

I currently have no issues in their voices (at least in my opinion), but I'm always willing to listen if there's anything I can improve. I've also been a bit slow during past month/past few weeks because of RL issues. I'm sorry for any and all inconveniences.
babel_hacker: (The Aspiring Programmer)

[personal profile] babel_hacker 2013-03-17 08:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Atsuro Kihara | SMT: Devil Survivor | [personal profile] babel_hacker | Private HMD
onelevelmeaner: ([happy] winkuu)

[personal profile] onelevelmeaner 2013-03-17 09:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Hikaru Hitachiin | Ouran High School Host Club | [personal profile] onelevelmeaner
whateveryoueatliveitspart: (smile)

[personal profile] whateveryoueatliveitspart 2013-03-17 11:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Apollo | Genesis of Aquarion OVA | [personal profile] whateveryoueatliveitspart
nobel: (fight fight fight)

[personal profile] nobel 2013-03-18 01:15 am (UTC)(link)
Allenby Beardsley | Mobile Fighter G Gundam | [personal profile] nobel (private HMD)

I believe I've been fairly rusty so far as I've been re-introducing RP into my routine after a couple of years of not being involved with the hobby, and I've definitely been slow due to surprise computer problems. As for the latter, I now have regular computer access again and hope to deliver swifter, more consistent tags in the future.

I'm definitely open to any suggestions, critique and what-have-you!
gunkonmyboot: ([chibi; u call that adorable?])

[personal profile] gunkonmyboot 2013-03-18 02:32 am (UTC)(link)
Android 17 | DBZ | this journal
Perona | One Piece | [personal profile] lolighostgirl
Pinkie Pie | My little pony | [personal profile] brbmakingfriends

Slow on tags lately, recovered from being sick.
triptoprofiling: (☂ thoughts running all around)

[personal profile] triptoprofiling 2013-03-19 12:29 am (UTC)(link)
Norman Jayden | Heavy Rain | [personal profile] triptoprofiling

i know, i know... i'm a late mclate face orz
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[personal profile] timelymaid 2013-03-30 05:23 am (UTC)(link)
Aradia Megido | Homestuck | [personal profile] timelymaid
Mitsukuni "Honey" Haninozuka | Ouran | [personal profile] cakelover

...LATE, SORRY.