HMD | September 2012

[these_balls]

EVALUATE MY BATTLING!

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[these_balls]

[bellyshirt]

Luke fon Fabre → Tales of the Abyss → HMD
      → No issues at the moment.

Kiki → Kiki's Delivery Service → HMD
      → May need some pick-me-up ideas from someone who isn't Alex, since she's kind of flickering out.

[pinnedbangs]

How about cooking time with Rin? or she could make deliveries for him

I haven't anything planned but I have an idea about sending random gifts (or planned gifts) from the Celadon Center. Like, maybe occasional sweets? Or... whatever? Kiki would like that, right? ;u;

[fonic_sight]

❤ Miyako Inoue | digital_bingo ✖ digimon adventure 02
✿ Flora Reinhold | icansolvethemtoo ✖ professor layton → crit page
☢ Jade Curtiss | fonic_sight ✖ tales of the abyss → crit page

[viiru2alert]

♊ Sollux Captor | Homestuck | viiru2alert

[pianokeys]

Other Father ♫ Coraline @journal
Barry Hatch ♪ Fable III @journal

[licentious]

Lust (licentious) and Rangiku (conduit). I know I've been struggling to keep up with what I have, but I know I'm definitely going to try and improve on my tagging speed and I'm trying new methods. The lack of energy to do things I'm also going to bring up with my physician as soon as I see him.

Both should have anonymous enabled HMD on their journals.

[paladinlost]

Cecil Harvey | Final Fantasy IV: The After Years (Dissidia: Final Fantasy) | this journal

[exeggutorhead]

Envy | Fullmetal Alchemist | this journal

[fairycircle]

Cheria | Tales of Graces f | fairycircle
Vanitas | Kingdom Hearts | shadowdive

[comeatmibro]

Miyuki Chitose ➥ Prince of Tennis ➥ HMD

[soggypastry]

Lightning Farron | FF13 | soggypastry

[newberktown]

Hiccup Haddock | How to Train Your Dragon | newberktown

Just came back a few days ago, but let me know if you've noticed something I should work on!

His personal HMD is here if you'd prefer that.

[blackestheart]

Gamzee Makara | Homestuck | This journal

I know I just got here, but figured I might as well since it's my first time playing Gamzee in an actual game.

[bewilding]

I just have Judith here, from Tales of Vesperia!

If you have any comments about general RP things or specific characterization, please don't hesitate to tell me. I always want to improve! c:

If you feel more comfortable with a private HMD, she has one on her journal right over here!

[urbaninja]

Roxas | Kingdom Hearts | seasaltkeys
Barney Stinson | How I Met Your Mother | usedsuitup

No real notes since I'm feeling okay with both of them. Just need to get activity up</small.

[fullmoonfortune]

Luca Milda | Tales of Innocence | milquetoasthero
Ryoji Mochizuki | Shin Megami Tensei: Persona 3 | fullmoonfortune

I'm working on getting back into the groove of tagging, but it's coming a lot harder than I thought it would. University is unexpectedly tough, but that's because I took a whole year off -- anyway, they also both have private HMDs if you'd prefer that (I think?)!

[roemance]

Eridumb Bakampora | Homestuck | roemance

[explosivecombat]

Solf J Kimblee | Fullmetal Alchemist | explosivecombat
Jean Descole | Professor Layton | scientificflair
Zulf | Bastion | leaveyourstarburning
Reaver | Fable | istheindustry

Working myself back into the swing of things; I had a few serious RL crises/situations come up over the last two months, and while things are definitely better now and mostly stabilized, things may crop up once in a while that will slow my tagging speed. The mods have been notified of the nature of these issues already.

[ortion]

Larry Butz | Ace Attorney | failures
Dist the Rose | Tales of the Abyss | ortion

[subtlecoruscate]

Touya Rima ✚ Vampire Knight ✚ HMD

[fuwa_fuwa]

Yui Hirasawa | K-ON!

She has a crit page if you'd prefer to use that Route 29. i'm sorry that was terrible

[doitrockapella]

▶ Yagyuu Hiroshi | Prince of Tennis | usedlaserbeam
▶ Carmen Sandiego | Where On Earth Is Carmen Sandiego? | doitrockapella
▶ Albert Rosenfield | Twin Peaks | worktodo


I think the three of them are all doing fairly well in their own respects? Please let me know if you have any questions I can answer about what they're up to or how they're doing, and any comments or suggestions are appreciated!

[enjoymyatelier]

Kayneth Archibald El-Melloi | Fate/Zero | enjoymyatelier

Tagging drive has been kind of erratic lately on account of RL, but I think I've doing a reasonably good job of keeping at it. Let me know if there are any other issues, of course!

[cobraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa]

Cobra Commander | G.I. Joe | cobraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa | HMD
No real concerns here. As always trying to maintain a balance between hideous failure and him being an actual terrorist.

Gordon Cole | Twin Peaks | canthearyou | HMD
I think I'm doing okay with his voice. A little unsure on how he comes across through text though. This is my first time playing from this canon, and I'm still pretty new to it, so please let me know if I need to improve on something.

[8etterl8]

I've only read part of one thread of Gordon's with Albert, but so far his voice comes off really well from what I read. I could easily hear Gordon saying those things in his voice, so I think you're doing a good job there so far.

[8etterl8]

Vriska Serket | Homestuck | 8etterl8