HMD | July 2012

[these_balls]

EVALUATE MY BATTLING!

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Comments

[(Anonymous)]

Lately it's been feeling like Xion hasn't really developed in her time here in Route. There's a lot of flipflopping between being a super derp (which isn't bad, she is one of the many people in Sora's heart), to worried that she's hurting her friends with her existence, to getting into physical trouble just about every month or two.

It's understandable if she's fresh from canon, because she really does have things she's more concerned about. However, she's been here about two years? Almost two years? And still has those nagging doubts despite being in Route for so long with many people who look out for her and care for her. It's almost like you're using the sad, tragic part of her to roll drama, so she can then look like the perfect girl when she has her derp moments?

This is something I've been noticing over the last six months, and it's a little strange to me at this point that she hasn't really seemed to have relaxed at all.

[allbend]

Honestly? I hadn't intended to actually use that side of her to highlight any "perfect girl" look because Xion is hardly the sort, so I'm sorry if it seemed like that. As for the flipflopping, yeah, I'm aware of things on that end because... I just didn't really know how to handle Xion's growth from such a complicated background?

But you're right; lately I was feeling she should start to be more upbeat after being over a year here (not really close to being two years for her yet. Just another six or so months), but it looks like I lagged far too much to start on that. Thank you for the input, though. I'll try to put more effort into having Xion see she's more of a positive than a negative... and not get into much trouble.