HMD | June 2012

[these_balls]

EVALUATE MY BATTLING!

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Comments

[ortion]

Larry Butz | Ace Attorney | failures | HMD
Dist the Rose | Tales of the Abyss | ortion | HMD

[fuwa_fuwa]

Diiiist~ I was reading his intro post and it was excellent--I could hear his voice coming through perfectly with each line.

[little_anchor]

☼ Monkey D. Luffy | little_anchor ✖ one piece → crit page
❤ Miyako Inoue | digital_bingo ✖ digimon adventure 02
✿ Flora Reinhold | icansolvethemtoo ✖ professor layton → crit page

[ai]

Saber ➦ Fate/stay night
Kyrie ➦ Devil May Cry
Miki Hoshii ➦ THE iDOLM@STER
Female Protag ➦ Fate/Extra

➥ I can't change the fact I only tag overnights now :( I've been trying to work on catching up on things during the weekend and tagging out more due to it. There may be a general decline in posts from me due to this.
➥ Female Protag is my newest character so I would appreciate input on her. I plan to do a write-up of the NG+ mechanics so that there's no confusion regarding that. I hope to have it posted in her journal in a couple of weeks, maybe a bit longer.
➥ I'm working on expanding my knowledge of Miki Hoshii due to previously received crit. She also has her very own HMD post if you want to bring up issues in private.
➥ Any advice on doing easier egg posts? I normally don't ask people to respond to them, but I think if there was a shorter/concise way, they may be more likely to. I'd appreciate help on that. <3

[(Anonymous)]

For a second there I thought we had a Deedlit and I was doing to get all excited. Look what you've done. :(

Can't say much about your characters, since I haven't really tagged with any of them, but Miki's fun to see around.

[whateveryoueatliveitspart]

Apollo | Genesis of Aquarion OVA | whateveryoueatliveitspart

I know his canon isn't well-known, so if you want to critique the quality of my writing instead of how I play him, I'm good for that too. Or anything, really.

[pinnedbangs]

I know nothing of his canon, but I do like seeing him around! I also enjoy how you play his down to earth personality. As such, I'm tempted to learn more of his canon~.

[explosivecombat]

Solf J Kimblee | Fullmetal Alchemist | explosivecombat
Jean Descole | Professor Layton | scientificflair
GLaDOS | Portal | neurotoxined
Tokiomi Tohsaka | Fate/Zero | pretentions
Zulf | Bastion | leaveyourstarburning

[yesadministrator]

Other Father [Coraline] pianokeys
Miss Pauling [Team Fortress 2] yesadministrator

[torrentofbits]

Loki Laufeyson | Marvel Comics | torrentofbits | HMD

Plan to get on top of activity and tag out this weekend. I had a lot of school stuff due this week and then I ended up celebrating my birthday for a couple days. So sorry about the delay in tags. ;;

But anyway, since this character is totally new for me, so I'd really like to know how I'm doing.

[paladinlost]

Cecil Harvey | Final Fantasy IV: The After Years (Dissidia: Final Fantasy) | this journal

[3_butterflies]

Fluttershy here, and Minnie Mouse (her_mouse_jesty.)

[uuing]

Maria Ushiromiya → Umineko no Naku Koro ni → uuing

private hmd on the first post in her journal and all that!

p.s. I know I've been a little on the slow side with tags lately, this is since I'm finishing up my finals and stuff for school! My last final should be Tuesday so after that I'll try to get up to usual speed again, thanks for your patience!

[empireofmymind]

Ken Ichijouji | Digimon Adventure 02 | empireofmymind
Malik Ishtar | Yu-Gi-Oh! | best_laid_plans
Kanade Amou | Senki Zesshou Symphogear | usedperishsong

Everybody has HMDs in their journals too!

Ken and Malik have been kind of preoccupied with plotty things this month, but they've started tagging out more again.

[newberktown]

Hiccup | HTTYD | newberktown
Lisa Garland | Silent Hill | bluedespitebeing
Keisuke Takagi | SMT: Devil Survivor | laplaceattorney

Known issues are:
LACK OF ACTIVITY. I know I haven't really been around so much this past month or so, or at all this past week. This mostly affects Lisa, since I have very few ideas for her in general, and least affects Hiccup since...he is incredibly fun for me to play.
I also know I really need to update my info, but coding is a battle for me even when I use the simplest kind.

If you have any suggestions for me, I am all ears! Everyone also has a post for HMD in their journals if you would prefer that. It's in the same post as my contact info.

[thewhite_symphony]

Lacus Clyne || Gundam SEED Destiny || the_whitequeen

Slowly --- coming back from hiatus.

[usedcharm]

I know you're getting back from hiatus so there's no rush but... when you have time? Serah sent a thing Lacus' way. :)

PS: You tempt me to attemt to watch SEED/SEED Destiny again. I've always been very Wing and nothing else about Gundam so it'd be a first for me.

[avianweapon]

Peacock | Skullgirls | avianweapon

Absolutely any crit would be loved! I'm really worried about Peacock's voice, which is the reason I haven't really been doing much on the tagging front lately--I'm really sorry about that. D:

Peacock also has an HMD on her journal too!

[enjoymyatelier]

Kayneth Archibald El-Melloi | Fate/Zero | enjoymyatelier

crit me with your best shot

[milquetoasthero]

Luca Milda | Tales of Innocence | milquetoasthero | HMD

[fuwa_fuwa]

Yui Hirasawa | K-ON! | fuwa_fuwa

There's a crit post stickied at the top of her journal. o7 Also, she's an entirely new character for me, so if there's any comments, they'd be greatly appreciated!

[marimbagirl]

Mutou Yuugi | Yu-Gi-Oh! | kingofgamecorner
Anissa | HM: Animal Parade | marimbagirl
Ryuuzaki Umi | Magic Knight Rayearth | learnedwaterpledge

My activity's gotten sporadic, especially since June started, but that was partly from life stress and I've sort of alleviated some of that!

So hopefully you'll hear more from my older babies, and faster chat from everyone starting Monday, after my extended family visit is over.

Oh! And any advice on how my characterization is, or what you'd love to see any of them do in Johto is instant <3

i'm not late for once??

[skirtchases]

Zidane Tribal | Final Fantasy IX | skirtchases

[pinnedbangs]

Rin Okumura | Blue Exorcist | pinnedbangs | HMD

I'm on a backtagging spree of semi-epic proportions...

[hurtitselfinconfusion]

Chris Yukine | Senki Zesshou Symphogear | hurtitselfinconfusion

I also have a HMD on her journal, if you'd rather use that

[panics]

Jyou Kido | Digimon Adventure | panics

I'M TERRIBLE AT KEEPING ACTIVE, I am so sorry ;n;

[sweet_daydream]

Nagisa Aoi | Strawberry Panic | sweet_daydream

[subtlecoruscate]

Touya Rima | Vampire Knight | subtlecoruscate

[usedcharm]

Rinoa Heartilly | Final Fantasy VIII | usedcharm
Serah Farron | Final Fantasy XIII-2 | chasingstorms

I've been playing Rinoa forever so sometimes I wonder if perhaps I keep adding things in that shouldn't be at her point in canon yet or not. I've gotten rather used to playing her post game.

Serah... I'm trying to make her less insular, which has been a fun struggle. I'll be canon reviewing so hopefully that'll help make it easier for me to make her a little more pro-active about reaching out to people.