This girl's had some recent character development based off events in-game -- let me know if she's deviating too far from character thanks to these, or if there's anything I can improve on. Anything, even if it's just a critique of my writing style, please don't hesitate to let me know.
Jade
This girl's had some recent character development based off events in-game -- let me know if she's deviating too far from character thanks to these, or if there's anything I can improve on. Anything, even if it's just a critique of my writing style, please don't hesitate to let me know.