Mayuri Shiina (椎名まゆり) (
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2013-07-17 05:21 am (UTC)
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I really like how distinct your characters sound! The only piece of crit I can offer is that Hiroshi overuses the phrase "I suppose" a bit too much. If it's a canon thing disregard that though.
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